Critical thinking Presentation feedback and improving work

 I have received feedback from 2 people. First feedback I received from Monica


Presentation Feedback and Improving work: 

1) Did everyone understand what your project was about? If not why not and what could you improve?

Yes, everybody understood what my project was about.

2) Did your peers think that you had good initial ideas and research? If not why not and what could you improve?

My peers decided that I have a good initial ideas and research. 

3) Did your peers feel that you were challenging yourself? If not why not and what could you improve?

My peers feel that I am challenging myself because I am planning to use various software and different skills.

4) Did they think you had good research throughout? If not why not and what could you improve?


5) What other feedback did you get that you found useful?

 I would like you to consider Alina’s Suggestions on bees and butterflies for my project.

6) Overall do you think presented the work well? If not, why not?

My presentation was not well presented because I was not prepared for it I have just made good presentation using PowerPoints and had a few paintings and sketches.





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